I found the various angles made this lively and interesting. In-and-out of focus worked really well in parts, but there were times when I just wished I could be allowed to see the action more clearly or at least stay with it. Obviously shooting handheld gave a sense of your participation in the event, but after about 2 minutes, I was feeling seasick and had to stop watching. By the way, I know almost nothing about the technical side of the cinematic approach to filmmaking, I'm just reporting back as an independent observer. Hope you don't take offense.